,,People once believed that, when someone dies, a crow carries their soul to the land of the dead. But sometimes, something so bad happens that a terrible sadness is carried with it and the soul can't rest. Then sometimes, just sometimes, the crow can bring that soul back to put the wrong things right."
I love this. I would just change the focus into the girl instaed of the ground (which seems to be the main point but since it's so dark i can't be sure...) But maybe that would have changed the whole atmosphere so... I don't know! It's great anyways!
I'm glad for you comment and thank you (I don't know how I focused... It wasn't my camera and it was fast photographing )
Looks scary, in a good way